Structure an explainer: and, but, therefore
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- explainer-structure-abt
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- Tell an explanation as a story with the And, But, Therefore structure, which the scientist and filmmaker Randy Olson recommends for narrative. Use when explaining how something happened or why something changed, when a draft is a flat list of events, or when planning the steps of a scrollytelling piece.
And, But, Therefore
A story is a sequence of events where each one causes the next. The test: between your sentences, can you put "and then" (weak) or "but" and "therefore" (strong)? Randy Olson describes this as the ABT template in Houston, We Have a Narrative. If you have not chosen a format yet, start with the explainer skill.
The three beats
- And. Set up what is true and what is going on: the people, the thing, the situation. Several "and" sentences are fine.
- But. The tension: a surprise, an obstacle, a contradiction. One clear "but" per story is enough, and it is the moment the reader leans in.
- Therefore. What followed from the "but": what was done, what happened, what we learned. The ending is a consequence, not just the last event.
Long explainers repeat the pattern: each "therefore" opens a new "and", up to three or four rounds.
Template
And: <The starting state and the people or things in it.>
But: <What did not fit, broke or surprised.>
Therefore: <What happened as a result, and what it shows.>
Example, for the story of a bridge:
- And: the town had one bridge, and it carried all the traffic to the market.
- But: after the flood of 1962 the bridge could no longer carry heavy loads.
- Therefore: the town built a second crossing downstream, and the market moved with it.
How to write it
- List the events, then link each pair with "and then", "but" or "therefore". Rewrite every "and then" into a real cause, or cut the event.
- Pick the "but" that matters most. If every event is a "but", the story has no centre.
- Start as close to the "but" as you can. Setup that does not feed the tension goes.
- Make the "therefore" concrete: a decision, a number, a result. Then say what it shows for the reader's own case.
- Tell it in the order of cause, not necessarily of the calendar. Flash back only when the reader would be lost otherwise.
Pair it with a format
- Scrollytelling is the natural home: one beat per step, with the visual changing at each "but" and "therefore". Let the first step set the scene with an "and".
- Open with Situation, Complication, Resolution when the reader needs the point before the story; it is the same idea in a shorter, more business-like form.
- Use page furniture for a
timelineof the dates behind the story, and atakeawaysbox at the end. - To explain how a mechanism works rather than what happened, use How it works.
Mistakes
- Events in order with nothing causing the next ("and then... and then...").
- No real "but": the story is a description. If nothing went wrong or surprised anyone, it may be better as How it works.
- A "therefore" that is just the final event. Ask what it shows.
- Inventing tension that the facts do not support. Keep the story true.